由于对原文的质朴简洁缺乏认识以及没能正确使用本国语言，译者使用了不少不符合汉语习惯用法的冗词赘语，以致无法传达出原文优美的语言特征。

Fang Ping loses himself in verbiage which does not tally with the Chinese usage, so that he fails to convey the simple and graceful language characteristic of the original.

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由于对原文的质朴简洁缺乏认识以及没能正确使用本国语言，译者使用了不少不符合汉语习惯用法的冗词赘语，以致无法传达出原文优美的语言特征。

Fang Ping loses himself in verbiage which does not tally with the Chinese usage, so that he fails to convey the simple and graceful language characteristic of the original.

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