谢谢，我拿到了。让我看看。一切看起来都没问题。

Thanks, I'll take it. Let's take a look. Everything looks ok.

youdao

在屏幕上，看起来一切都没问题。而当我在纸质稿上审阅相同的内容时，才会突然意识到文章里的陈词滥调，冗词赘句或哪里太平铺直叙了。

My prose will always look so flawless on the screen, but then I read the same words on the physical page and I suddenly see all my clichés and banalities and excesses.

youdao