Once you have a first draft on paper, you can delete material that is unrelated to your thesis and add material necessary to illustrate your points and make your paper convincing.

一旦你有了论文的第一份草稿，你就可以删除与你的理论不相关的材料，并有必要增加阐释你的观点和让你的论文更有信服力的资料。

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Always remember that a thesis is a formal document: every item must be in the appropriate place, and repetition of material in different places should be eliminated.

一直铭记论文是一种很正规的文献，每一个材料都必须放在合适的位置，应该避免材料在不同地方的重复。

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That means that your readers may not have any experience with some of the material needed to follow your thesis, so you need to give it to them.

意思就是说你的读者也许不了解你论文所涉及的一些材料，那么你就需要提供给他们。

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The dossier, which set out evidence about Saddam's alleged chemical and biological weapons programs, caused embarrassment for the government after it was revealed it included material copied from an American student's thesis that was posted on the Internet.

CNN: Blair accused over Iraq WMD threat