It's too factual on its own, you need to add some comment in that section about the implications of the figures.

表格本身过于注重事实本身了，你得在这部分内容里加些关于这些数字含义的论述。

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No matter what the content of the message, its real point is, "I want you to know that I care about you."

不管信息的内容是什么，它真正的意思是，“我想让你知道，我在乎你。”

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Worry, by its very nature, means thinking about the future—and if you hoist yourself into awareness of the present moment, worrying melts away.

忧虑，就其本质而言，意味着思考未来——如果你把自己提升到对当下时刻的意识中，忧虑就会化为乌有。

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"The nation's brand is basically its image, its reputation," "Whether you are talking about getting tourists, or getting investors, or getting talent or getting respect, attention,and so forth.

VOA: standard.2009.11.05

Who is the composer of the piece that you're about to hear and what is its title or what's it called?

下面你们要听到的片段的作曲家是谁,曲名是什么

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You don't have to declare a special variable for it if you don't care about its actual value.

你并不需要为它声明一个特定的变量,如果你不关心它的实际值。

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You will not just learn about its past, you will taste it too -- with a dram of 12-year-old Chivas Regal and 18-year-old Chivas Regal.

BBC: Exploring Scotland��s historic whisky trail

The financial industry has eased back its ad pitches about making you rich by next year with hot stocks.

FORBES: What's the Plan?

Unless you already knew about LIBOR its impact is probably negligible and may only hit you indirectly.

FORBES: About The Alleged LIBOR "Scandal", Back Away From The Cliff