It may be a good idea to ask your American friends to look at the way you're writing, and give you some suggestions for improvement.

让你的美国朋友看看你的写作方式，并给你一些改进的建议，也许是个好主意。

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American auto manufacturers are using quality improvement as one way to recapture world markets.

美国汽车制造商正将质量的优化作为重新占领世界市场的一种方式。

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So if we think about the enterprise as a network of events, this gives us a direct way to reason about strategic business improvement.

所以如果我们将企业思考为一个事件的网络，这给了我们直接的方式去考虑战略性业务改进。

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Saving and Loan Associations, by the way, no longer exclusively limit themselves to mortgage lending -either they do home improvement lending and auto loans and the like as well.

顺便提一下,储贷协会,现在也不仅限于发放抵押贷款,他们也发放住房装修贷款,及汽车消费贷款之类的

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And the greatest danger of all, given that most education and health spending goes on pay, may be that much of the extra money provided as a result of the comprehensive spending review ends up in the wallets of the teaching and medical professions, without much in the way of service improvement to show for it.

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This contract is where the public sector pays the private sector to secure a substantial improvement in the way of life for a specific group, in order to reduce the public sector's costs in the long-run.

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Hack can have two meanings: One, an elegant improvement or better way to do things.

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