只有到了现在,我才理解:从我的头几篇文章中爱波伦丝太太看出了我写作的毛病,诸如爱用大词,夸张华丽,不注意结构等。
Only now do I understand. After my first few papers, Mrs. Abrams knew I had a problem with exaggeration, flamboyant descriptions, and a lack of organization in my papers.
爱波伦丝太太把我喜欢的讲究修辞用语的陈述和严密的组织结构融合在一起,使我在练习中发现了适合自己的写作风格,从而使我的写作水平大大地提高,产生了质的飞跃。
Mrs. Abrams had fused my love of description and articulation with a martinet like organization to improve my writing by leaps and bounds. This allowed me to find my own style of writing.
五尺五身高的我可以笑,跳,跑,跳舞,写作,绘画,帮助别人,做志愿者,做祷告,爱和哭。
At five foot five I can laugh, jump, run, dance, write, paint, help, volunteer, pray, love and cry.
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