I hate to sound like a nitpicker, but I found a comma missing in your third paragraph and another comma missing down in the tenth paragraph.

我很讨厌听起来好像是在挑剔。但是我发现你文章的第三段里少了一个逗号，在第十段里也少了一个逗号。

youdao

You have an address cleansing service that checks the validity of addresses, but requires an address to be given as a comma delimited value; that is, there is an AddressCSV data type in the library.

您有一个地址清理服务，它检查地址的有效性，但是需要给出一个地址作为被逗号分隔的值；也就是说，库中存在一种 AddressCSV 数据类型。

youdao

If secured HTTP is used, specify HTTP for the protocol, but specify two port Numbers separated by a comma, one for unsecured communication and one for SSL secured communication.

如果使用安全的http，为协议指定http，而指定两个用逗号分割的通道数，一个用于不安全的信息传递，另一个用于SSL安全的信息传递。

youdao

' But without a comma after 'apartment, ' the sentence signifies that the suspect has at least two apartments.

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