对作品的修改就是要评估你写的文章各个方面的效果及适合性,使主题更明确,并更集中在你要阐述的事实和观点上。
Revising involvesassessingthe effectiveness and appropriateness of all aspects of your writing, making your purpose more clearly, and refocusing or developing the facts and ideas you present.
保持在笔记本上手写写作的习惯,奥斯特逐段逐段修改他的作品直到满意为止。 (他补充道,对《黑暗中的男人》做的修改,比他其他作品都来得少。)
Writing by hand in notebooks, he'll revise paragraph by paragraph until he's happy with what he's done (there were fewer corrections for Man in the Dark, he adds, than in his other novels).
在该市第一次拒绝他的作品之后,他对画作稍微做了一点修改。
After the city's original rejection of his work, he retooled the painting, slightly.
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