Wright revised this image in those drafts.

进行了修改。

耶鲁公开课 - 1945年后的美国小说课程节选

Actually all of these early drafts -- these notes, these outlines for this tragedy that actually never seems to have gotten written - are included in the Tyco packet.

其实这些早先的草稿--这些为这部从没写成的,悲剧而做的的笔记，提纲,-都在打印的阅读材料里。

耶鲁公开课 - 弥尔顿课程节选

I don't know where the drafts that accompanied these correspondences are.

从何寻起,可能这些信件。

耶鲁公开课 - 1945年后的美国小说课程节选

That was supposed to be a tragedy that, in some manuscript drafts that we still have today -- in some manuscript drafts, he titled this prospective tragedy Paradise Lost and in other drafts Adam Unparadised.

他打算写一部悲剧，在一些目前还存留的草稿中,我们看到弥尔顿将这部要写的悲剧命名为,《失乐园》，在另外一些草稿中又叫做《亚当失乐园》

耶鲁公开课 - 弥尔顿课程节选

There are two other drafts.

仔细看一下。

耶鲁公开课 - 1945年后的美国小说课程节选

We don't know the intended recipient of this letter, and we actually have no idea whether Milton actually sent the letter; but a couple of drafts of this letter actually exist in Milton's own hand, and the letter is clearly a document that Milton had devoted some energy and some time to. We need to look at it.

我们不知道收件人是谁，我们也不清楚弥尔顿到底有没有寄这封信;,但这份信的草稿确实在弥尔顿那里，弥尔顿显然对这封信投入了不少,时间和精力，我们来看看。

耶鲁公开课 - 弥尔顿课程节选