你提出的论点很好，但整篇文章缺乏呼应连贯。
The points you make are fine, but the whole essay lacks coherence.
多德曼的文章和之前IIED资深工作人员大卫·萨特斯怀特的一个研究相呼应，后者也认为城市的温室气体排放量是总量的40%，而非80%。
Dodman's paper complements an earlier study by IIED senior fellow David Satterthwaite, who argued that cities emit about 40% of all greenhouse gases, as opposed to the oft-cited 80%.
而最终要达到的是，一篇论文有着前后呼应的论点，这些论点从很多书籍或刊物文章中得到论据与相关思想。
The expected end result is a paper making a coherent argument that draws its supporting evidence or ideas from several books or journal articles.
两人身后镜子的上面，可以看到一则精致的手写资讯，对外行人来说看上去像是某个古老的文章或者格言，恰好呼应了主人公高贵的身份。
Above the mirror can be seen a message in elaborate handwriting, looking to the untrained eye like some ancient passage or motto, befitting the noble subjects.
这跟《绅士》杂志上最近发表的一篇文章的观点遥相呼应- - -“戈尔先生，你解决全球变暖问题的方法是不对的”。
It's a point echoed in "Mr. Gore, Your Solution to Global Warming is Wrong," a feature in the current issue of Esquire magazine.
我得说，无论它们确实属于自由漂浮的行星或者属于沿某些很大的轨道运行的行星，现在都还没得到证明。他在《自然》杂志的发现栏目上也发表了一篇相呼应的文章。
"Whether they're really freely floating planets or just in really wide orbits is not yet proven, I would say," said Wambsganss, who wrote an accompanying article in Nature about the discovery.
我得说，无论它们确实属于自由漂浮的行星或者属于沿某些很大的轨道运行的行星，现在都还没得到证明。他在《自然》杂志的发现栏目上也发表了一篇相呼应的文章。
"Whether they're really freely floating planets or just in really wide orbits is not yet proven, I would say," said Wambsganss, who wrote an accompanying article in Nature about the discovery.
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