她的散文文风并非一直恰到好处，她会赘叙。
Her prose style is not always felicitous; she tends to repetition.
在《美国太太的金丝雀》中，海明威采用省叙和赘叙的叙事方式讲述故事，使得故事的叙述者和聚焦人物笼罩着一层神秘色彩；
In A Canary for One, Ernest Hemingway tells his story in the ways of paralipsis and paralepsis, which casts an air of mystery over the narrator and the focused character of the story;
在屏幕上，看起来一切都没问题。而当我在纸质稿上审阅相同的内容时，才会突然意识到文章里的陈词滥调，冗词赘句或哪里太平铺直叙了。
My prose will always look so flawless on the screen, but then I read the same words on the physical page and I suddenly see all my clichés and banalities and excesses.
在屏幕上，看起来一切都没问题。而当我在纸质稿上审阅相同的内容时，才会突然意识到文章里的陈词滥调，冗词赘句或哪里太平铺直叙了。
My prose will always look so flawless on the screen, but then I read the same words on the physical page and I suddenly see all my clichés and banalities and excesses.
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